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Writing the Twitter Pitch

Feb 28, 2013 | , , | 10 Comments

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Lately the buzz word for pitches has become the Twitter Pitch. You may see agents asking for Twitter Pitches in contest or hey, on Twitter! So what is this? Basically, it’s where you sum up the essence ofย your novel in 140 characters or 2o words.

What are the benefits to a Twitter Pitch?

1. It’s a quick, concise version of your book.

2. You can offer your readers or listeners a snapshot of what your book is about.

3. Catches a person’s attention. (Remember, we live in a fast food age!)

4. Often it’s a phrase or thoughtย rather than a sentence.

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How to Craft a Twitter Pitch:

Ah, now here’s the tricky part. We have already agreed that it’s short. But it must also have power, be clear and have a hook that will make your reader want more. Enough to buy the book.

1. Study examples.ย Below, I’veย listed examples ofย pitches from the OneFourย KidLit authors.

2.ย Jot down notes of what your book is about.

3. Now start piecing together those notes, slashing unnecessary words.

4. Make sure you include the character, the conflict, and the basic essence of the story.

5. Details. Be as specific as you can without spoilers.

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Things to Remember:

1. Add in your own flair.

2. Use power verbs.

3. Use visual words.

 

Note:

If you wish to write a one sentence pitch and aren’t worried over the length, then check out Nathan Bransford’s blog. I LOVE Nathan Bransford’s simple formula:ย  โ€œWhen [opening conflict] happens to [character(s)], they must [overcome conflict] to [complete their quest].โ€

Check out Carissa Taylor’s post for more information here.ย 

Examples:

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YA Mythological Paranormal (Skyscape/Amazon Children’s)
A girl with a black belt and a deadly proclivity with steel-tipped arrows discovers a Korean god kidnaps the oldest daughter of her family.

Christina Farley

HEART BAND (Book 1: I Heart Band, Book 2: Friends, Fugues, and Fortune Cookies)
MG Contemporary (Penguin/Grosset & Dunlap)
A series about the thrills and spills, practices and performances, crushes and crises of middle school band geeks.
Michelle Schusterman

LANDRY PARK
YA Light Sci-Fi (Dial/Penguin)
Gone with the Nuclear
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Bethany
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NEARLY GONE
YA thriller (Kathy Dawson Books/Penguin)
A math whiz from a trailer park discovers she’s the only student capable of unraveling complex clues left by a serial killer who’s systematically getting rid of her classmates.
Elle Cosimano

SEKRET
YA historical thriller (Roaring Brook Press/Macmillan Children’s)
Psychic teens in Soviet Russia are forced to spy for the KGB against the backdrop of impending nuclear war.
Lindsay Smith

EXTRACTION
YA Sci-fi (St. Martin’s/MacMillan)
A girl wins escape from a brutal life on her planet’s surface only to face the cruel realization that her new life within the core has its own set of horrors.
Stephanie Diaz

THE DELICIOUS DOUBLE LIFE OF GLADYS GATSBY
MG humor/adventure
(Putnam/Penguin)
An 11-year old girl secretly becomes a food critic for The New York Times.
Tara Dairman

My New Website Giveaway!

Feb 17, 2013 | , , , | 28 Comments

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I’m so excited about my new website. This beautiful site was designed by Denise from Biondo Studios. I really had no idea what I wanted for a site so I told her I wanted it to be unique, haveย gold tones, and have a fantasy feel. I think she pulledย all those elements together so beautifully.

Since I have this gorgeous site, I’ve decided to say goodbye to Chocolate for Inspiration. I really do love blogger and it was there for me as I first started writing and figuring out where I fit into the writing world. But the reason I have this website is to centralize all my writing ‘stuff’ so it’s all in one place and easy to find.

So to celebrate my pretty, shiny website, I’m giving away prize packs. Yay!

The first 20 people to comment below what they like best about the siteย automatically win a dragon sticker and charm:

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Or you can enter to win:

An ARC of The WAITING TREE by Lindsay Moyhihan and hardback of MY INVISIBLE GUY by Sarah Jeffrey curtesy of my publisher, Skyscape.

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Autographed copies of GOING BOVINE by Libba Bray and THE GODDESS TEST by Amiee Carter:

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A brand new GILDED swag pack (purse, sticker, dragon charm, and pencil)

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Lucky 13 Swag (a group of 2013 debut authors in kidlit)

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Fill out this Raffelcopter form to choose which pack you’d like to be entered for! It’s that simple. Thank you for celebrating with me!

 

 


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Writing Romance in Young Adult

Feb 14, 2013 | , , , , | 3 Comments

It’s Valentine’s Day and what better day to chat about writing romance in young adult books. One of the big areas that editors were asking for in the last three conferences I have been to is more romance in YA.

I think it’s important for us writers to remember that there should only be romance in the story if it’s needed. It has to have an integral part of the plot and character development.

The romance should have a plot arc of it’s own. This can be trickyย to not fall intoย the cliche relationship.

Booksย that I love andย give a shout out to the romance are:

Shadow and Bone by Leigh Bardugo
Jane by April Lindner
An Infidel in Paradise by S.J. Laidlaw
Reboot byย Amyย Tintera
Sanctum by Sarah Fine

Here’s a vlog I made for you on tips for writing romance in YA:

SCBWI NY and the MiGs

Feb 12, 2013 | | 4 Comments

One of the best parts of going to conferences is meeting up with writing friends. Two years ago, my online crit group, The MiG Writers committed to each other that we’d all go to the SCBWI conference together. And we did!

Above you’ll see a picture of all the MiG Writers in one place at one time! It was the first moment weย got to meet together. We had so much fun talking about writing, life, publishing, well just about everything.

 

Susan Laidlawย gave me an autographed copy of her book, AN INFIDEL IN PARADISE. It was such a great moment seeing this book come into a reality.

 

 

Debbie Ridpath Ohi signedย I’M BORED, the book she illustrated for us.
Carmella Van Vleet and me being silly.

 

 

Kate Fall and me hanging out in the lobby.

 

 

Andrea Mack and me seeing each other again (She visited Florida a while back so this was my second time seeing her).
We even made aย video of our time. Check it out!

SCBWI NY Conference Recap

Feb 11, 2013 | , , , , , , , | 7 Comments


The SCBWI NY conference was incredible. There just is no other word for it. The staff was helpful and I was impressed at how smoothly everything ran. They provided delicious breakfast breads and coffee (!!!!) each morning and the cocktail party was stunning and so yummy. I ate way too much of that sweet potato dish.


Here’s a picture of me with Kit Grindstaff and Ruth Setton at the social.

I took tedious notes throughout the conference and if you followed the Twitter hashtag #NY13SCBWI you’ll find my brief comments along with many others.


Here’s a picture of my MiG crit partners: Andrea Mack, Susan Laidlaw, Kate Fall and Carmella Van Vleet. So fun hanging out with them!

I found the conference inspiring, and within it, many gems of wisdom that I can use in my own writing.

Some brief thoughts of the weekend:

Meg Rosoffย talked about not getting discouraged when others ask: “When are you going to write a real book? Like for adults?” She also encourages writers to:ย “Be flexible“

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For my breakout session, I went to Molly O’Neil‘s talk- she’s encourages writers to write with authenticity and heart.

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Here’s theย line of books that Molly has edited.

Next I went Francoise Bui‘s sessionย because of her focus on characterization. Her three points were to build great characters you need voice, characterization and texture with in the story.

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Shaun Tan, an illustrator, spoke about the importance to not fear failure. This helps us to be free to create and experiment. Knowing you can throw out your work allows you to be uninhibited to create. I just loved that.

Margaret Peterson Haddix reminded us that we must write a book for theย kid that doesn’tย like to read. If we can do that, then the kids who do like to read will love it, too.

Julie Andews spoke with her daughter, Emma Walton Hamilton. I was amazed by Andrew’s presence, which seemed to fill the entire room. The two of them talked about brainstorming and then plotting since they need to work with each other to get the job done. Interestingly, they use a web cam for most of their writing sessions.

Since they write multiple books in a series, they realized they needed to keep the books balanced between the inevitable and the element of surprise, which can be tricky.

Finally, Mo Williams raced to the podium and then around the room. He was great and I laughed so hard. Williams urged us to go deeper, write what we don’t know and understand so that we can explore new emotions within ourselves. He also said to not be afraid to ask the tough questions.

Here’s a link of great advice on Mo Williams’s 9 Steps of Writing.

Oh, and I loved this line Williams said, “Writing is like a sale at the Gap. Take off 20%!”

Such a great experience. I would highly recommend this conference!

Day One of My New York City Trip!

Feb 8, 2013 | , , , , | 11 Comments

Last weekend I went to New York City for the SCBWI conference. It was an amazing weekend. I’m just now able to start wrapping my head around everything that happened. As promised, I’m going to give you a recap of my weekend, but it’s going to have to be in a number ofย blog posts because so much happened!ย 

I stayed at the Grand Hyatt with oneย my MiG partners, Debbie Ridpath Ohi. In fact, all the MiGs came for the conference and wow, we had a blast. You canย check out this post for all theย MiG pictures.ย Rooming with Debbie was perfect. She’s the best roommate! Look for the next picture book she’s illustrating, NAKED, coming out soon.


Friday morning, I took off to visit my publisher, Amazon Children’s. I decided to walk because I wanted to experience the city. Man it was cold!


Once there, I met my editor, Miriam Frank.ย It was wild to actually meet her in person.ย She took me on a tour of the office area that ACP is renting out until they move into their permanent offices. She dug through their boxes and handed me some of Skyscape’s upcoming books, ME AND MY INVISIBLE GUY and THE WAITING TREE. So excited to read those.


First she introduced me to Vera Soki, one of the designers, and Alan Tsai, the production manager.ย He also handed meย a stack of picture booksย for my boys and classroom, which the kids LOVED.


I also meet Katrina Damkoehler, the art director, who is responsible forย making all those beautiful covers ACP has.


Miriam and I went out for coffee and I talked herย ear off. Strangely she didn’t seem toย mind. But after our conversation, I realized how much we clicked and saw eye to eye on books and stories.ย She gave me book recommendations and had some insightful ideas for my possible sequel.ย I kept pinching myself because it was all too good to be reality.


When we went back toย APC, Miriam introduced me to Marilyn Brigham, another editor, as wellย as Tim Ditlow, the head of Skyscape, which isย the imprintย GILDED will be a part of. The only person I didn’t get to meet that I was hoping for was Margery Cuyler. I adore her books and was secretly hoping to snag an autograph.ย Margery was the one who first emailed me that they were taking GILDED to acquisitions.



As much as I didn’t want my time to end at ACP, I was super excited to meet my agent, Jeff Ourvan and Jennifer Lyons who runs the agency. Jeff picked me up at ACP, and it was as if I already knew him even though it it was our first time meeting. We met Jennifer at her house. I loved how there were books everywhere. Figures she’s the head of a literary agency!

Unfortunately, I totally forgot to get pictures with them! We were so busy talking and planning and then off to an amazing lunch, that the thought didn’t even cross my mind. Next time though!


Jennifer gave me a copy of their latest award winning book, THE REVOLUTION OF EVELYN SERRANO by Sonia Manzano. It won the Pura Belpre Honor Book.

After meeting Miriam, Jeff and Jennifer, I decided I am the luckiest girl on the planet to have a team of people who are excited about making GILDED become a reality. I think I literally floated for the rest of the day. No, I think I’m still floating.

News and Upcoming Conference

Jan 30, 2013 | , | 10 Comments

My big news is I’m super excited to be a part of the new Skyscape imprint at Amazon Children’s Publishing. For more details, you can check here where it was announcedย on Publisher’s Weekly.

Tomorrow, I’ll be flying out to New York City.ย It’s going to be a whirlwind trip and I can only imagine how cold it will be. But I can’t wait!

Friday my plans includeย meeting my editor, Miriam Frank, and all the amazing people at Skyscape. I’ll be having lunch with my agent, whom I’m so excited to finally meet him in person. That night I’ll be meeting a bunch of the OneFour members, a group of debut authors for 2014 that I recently joined.

Saturday and Sunday will be packed with the SCBWI conference as well as meeting the Lucky13s for lunch and Blueboarders for drinks.



But what I’m really excited about is hanging out with the MiGs all weekend. We promisedย each other two years ago to do this conference. At that time, I didn’t have an agent or a book deal, but I knew I was committed to our group and to making this dream of mine to get published a reality. And now it is. Kind of wild and exciting all mixed together.

I’m sure after the weekend is finished I’ll crash. I’m planning on taking plenty of pictures which I’ll post next week. If I don’t freeze to death in the meantime!

Congratulations to My Crit Partners!

Jan 17, 2013 | , , , , , , | 6 Comments

This has been a BIG week in my world because amazing things are happening to my very dear writing friends. I am so excited to announce:

Beth Revis‘ย releasedย SHADES OF EARTHย this week. Her final book in an incredible trilogy.


And due to her amazing pre-order sales, as promised, Penguin sent SHADES OF EARTH into space! Check out the Entertainment Weekly video clip here.

Beth’sย got more incredibleness up her sleeve.ย But that’s all still super secret stuff right now.

Debbie Ridpath Ohi announcedย the next book she will be illustrating withย Michael Black called NAKED. Oh what a title! I can’t wait to see how this book comes out. Here’s the Entertainment Weekly announcement. Many of you are familiar with I’M BORED, her last project that she worked with him on and received that won the Notable Children’s Book Award forย 2012 .


Carmella Van Vleet also announced her first middle grade book sale of ELIZA BING IS NOT A BIG FAT QUITTER to Holiday House. This is such a great bookย andย the main character takes a taekwondo class. As soon as the pre-order link is up on Amazon, you’ll be the first to know.

Finally, Susan Laidlaw’s YA, INFIDEL IN PARADISE, will be launched into the world in less than aย month! I can hardly believe it. If you haven’t preordered it, do so here.


So as you can see, lots of amazingness all around. I’m thrilled to be working with such an amazing and talented group of writers.

Creating Unique Details in Your Setting

Jan 10, 2013 | , , , | 10 Comments

There is nothing that kills a story quicker than when it’s set in the same old setting. Like the school cafeteria or the locker scene. Don’t get me wrong, you can use those settings, but my challenge to myself if I’m going to use those settings is toย find something unique.

For instance, I have the cafeteria scene, but I pull out the unique details of Korea using thumbprint scanners to deduct from student’s accounts. Or I have the locker scene, but then something (Sorry! No spoilers today!) very unusual happens.

When I was at the Hohenzollern Castle in Germany, I was overwhelmed by all the details that the builders put into the design of the buildings. I couldn’t resist chatting about how important using unique details creates a unique story.

You can check it out here:

What are ways that you incorporate details in your settings?

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