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Inner Conflict- Tear Up Your Characters
One focus in my current WIP is creating inner conflict in my characters. I decided to pull out some of my favorite novels to see what those characters had to go through.
Eclipse by Stephanie Meyer- Bella is in love with both Jake and Edward. She cannot love both, Werewolves and Vampires aren’t exactly buddies. She must choose.
Great and Terrible Beauty by Libba Bray. Gemma wants to bring the magic into her world but she knows she can’t control it.
Magic or Madness by Justine Larbalestier. Reason must either except the magic within herself which her mother has taught her is evil or go insane.
Wicked Lovely by Melissa Marr- Aislinn is madly in love with Seth but she is destined to become the fairey queen.
Bewitching Season by Marissa Doyle- Percy is torn. She thinks she’s put a love spell on the guy she’s madly in love with. Should she accept his love even if it’s not real or push him away?
It’s the PULL. In all these novels, the MC is pulled in two directions, both possible, but both with inner conflict. I’m trying to build this inner conflict in my characters and I’ve been pleased with the results so far.
In Donald Maas’s book Writing the Breakout Novel, he asks these questions: (Paraphrased) 
1. What does your character want more than anything?
2. What is the exact opposite of that?
3. How can you blend these to make your MC desire both?
Tear your characters up. Send them through an internal roller coaster. Put them through inner pain as well as external. After all, no pain, no gain.
Fast Drafting in 2009!
For my last book I made a sketch of an outline, which kept me focused and helped on those days where I wanted to just stare at my computer.
But for this novel, I went a step further. First I used this template to keep my story focused. I also took each character and created a web for them with all their favorites, needs, desires, motivations, and such. Jenny Myers has a fantastic character questionnaire that I used too, which got me asking some tricky questions.
Finally, I read Donald Maass How to Write a Breakout Novel, which by the way is excellent. Everything he had to say was spot on but what I liked best about his book were the examples he gave. It brought the concepts he wrote about to life. I also got the workbook that goes along with the book and I’ve been using that as well.
So, with all these tools, I’m ready to start writing! Better head back to my novel and start FAST DRAFTING!
Success in 2009!
He’s right! Goals made should be within our own power to make them happen. My critique partner, Beth Revis, talks about this on her blog too.
So this year, I’ve made my goals to be achievable only by me.
1. Finish revisions of my MG and tween novels.
2. Write and revise a YA novel.
3. Take a writing class.
4. Submit magazine articles from my travels to the Carus group and Highlights.
5. Blog and contribute to the writing community.
Totally Wild
Crikey! The animals of Australia are totally wild. While there, we visited the Australia Zoo (home of the Crocodile Hunter) and a wildlife preserve. It amazed me how unique Australia’s animals really are.
I mean, where else in the world do you have to worry about dingos stealing your steak off the barbie (American translation: BBQ)?
Luke was obsessed with feeding the kangaroos.
We saw the emu. Kind of looked like a peacock.
The cute little penguins. (I love penguins!)
I learned other things too. Like if you see a crocodile and it’s chasing you, run in a straight line, ’cause they’re actually quite slow on land.
Oh, and if you hit a koala, make sure you check to see if it’s still alive. If it is, head on down to the nearest wildlife rescue center.
And, if you walk out your front door to find a giant snake hanging out there, don’t panic. Just stroll on out the back door instead. After all, that’s why you have more than one door- right?
When the animal experts were explaining all this to us at the various shows and talks, I wasn’t so sure I could use this information since I live in an apartment in high rise city (Seoul). But then again, you never know…
Yep. There’s no question about it. Australia is really a totally wild world.
Journaling- Capturing Senses
I’m back from the Land Down Under! It was a 10 hour flight but our two boys took it all in stride, happily playing with Leapsters, writing and drawing in their journals (What can I say? They have a mother whose obsessed with writing), watching unlimited movies (Heaven), and eating lollipops (for the takeoff and landing).
For an early Christmas gift, my hubby bought me a cute journal (He read my blog. Bonus point!). I did my regular reflections and memories from each day of course, but this time I decided to go a step further.
You see, when I was writing my book set in France, I kept trying to pull back my memories of my trip there. What smells did I sense? Sounds? Fortunately I fast drafted that book just after the trip so everything was fresh and alive in my mind.
But what if I wanted to write another story in that same setting, say five years from now? (Confession: I have one in mind). Would I be able to pull that journal out and remember those senses? Maybe.
So for this trip, I had another section in my journal divided by each sense: smells, sights, touches, and sounds (note: this category had two parts, one for noise and another for language with words like g’day, mate and cheeky). Anytime one of those senses was triggered, I jotted it down. And every time I went to a new place- like the zoo, beach or pool- I made a mental note to identify those scents.
By the end of the trip, I was pleased with my results of my journal. And I hope, whenever I write my story set in Australia, I’ll have a plethora of sensory details to enrich my story.
Writer’s Rendition of the 12 Days of Christmas
Twelve story ideas
Eleven blogging posts
Ten blissfull sleeps
Nine sharpened pencils
Eight book reviews
Seven cups of coffee
Six revisions
Five trips to the bookstore
Four quiet hours
Three autograph parties
Two book deals
And a fabulous agent
Happy Holidays and a Christmas full of blessings!
Twilight Comes to Korea!
A large crowd had gathered outside the Mega Box Theater. Though there were no screaming fans, there was an energy that permeated the place. It was contagious!
The movie was great- even with Korean subtitles. I thought Kristen Stewart as Bella did a fabulous job and was mostly satisfied with Robert Pattinson as Edward. The makeup was a bit overdone and I thought the Cullens as a whole could have been flashier as that’s how I pictured them in the book. But the scenery and views added to the mood and I liked the hints at the future books. Sequel! And the audience loved it too (At least that’s what I assumed the reason for the screaming and sighs).
Why Live Overseas?
A couple of you have asked what brought my family and me to Korea. So here’s the short of it. About 9 years ago my husband and I were bored. We weren’t ready to settle down to the same job for the next twenty years, buy a house, and pop out five kids. (Don’t worry, that’s coming soon!- well, maybe not the 5 kids part)
… sigh.
The plan was to stay in Korea for 2-3 years and then jet off to somewhere else. But it’s been 7 years, 2 cats and 2 kids later and we’re still here. The school we’re at is amazing (Seoul Foreign School) and the opportunities and friends we’ve made are true treasures.
The Slush Pile

Chronicle Books– note: each bin is known to hold up to 100 picture book manuscripts. (My middle grade novel is in there somewhere. Can you find it?)












