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Mmm… Love that Smell

Mar 20, 2009 | | 16 Comments

Don’t you love the smell of fresh squeezed oranges? Chocolate chip cookies? How about baking bread?

My critique group always is helpful to remind me to incorporate smells into my stories. And they are right. Smells really add a strong mood to a scene.
In teaching, we’re told that scents help our student’s remember concepts. So in my classroom, I like to have the plug ins. In the spring I put something fresh in like Jasmine and Christmas it’s always gingerbread.

Similarly, in my stories, I’m always searching to add my sensory details and not the typical ones that might come to your mind right away. One of my favorite sites to get ideas is Bath and Body Shop. Check out this link for a list of different scents that might inspire you.

I think warm vanilla sugar and wild honeysuckle are my favorite for today. Tomorrow I’m sure it will be something different!

Busy Revising

Mar 13, 2009 | | 11 Comments

Oh it’s been so long since I’ve blogged. I’ve been having way too much fun revising my paranormal lately. When did revising become fun? Maybe I’m becoming a revising geek? Uh oh.

My class with Jill Santopolo has been AWESOME! She’s been pushing me to work on deepening my characters emotions and adding tension to the plot.

I’ve taken a new twist on my novel with Jill’s help by bringing in a love triangle into the story. She mentioned this sometime not too long ago (hence my love triangle post) and after mulling over it, I’m going for it. Big time.

I’ve never written a romance before but I’m realizing this story is definitely that and man, I’m having a blast doing it. Of course, I’m still doing all my crazy adventure stuff too because I hate getting bored.

The picture I attached is inspired from Carrie’s blog. You can make your own here.

I’m going to call her Aleysha but haven’t decided what superpowers she has. Any ideas?

Korea’s Turtle Ship

Mar 3, 2009 | | 20 Comments

When we went to the War Museum, we visited the replica of the Turtle Ship. It’s truly amazing in design and beautiful in appearance. As a history lover, I had to learn about this ship. There was a video there which I watched but then I went a step further and did some reading up on it. Here’s what I found:

During the 16th century in Korea, the Japanese attacked the Korean shores. To stop them General Yi Sun-sin was asked to defend his people. But he knew he needed something special, something different to outmaneuver the large Japanese fleet.

So he took an early design of a turtle ship and improved it. This ship had no keel but a flat bottom of ten heavy wooden boards. From those, he built the ship up on the sides and rounded out the top. The ship’s total length amounted to 110 feet long.
The arched and sloping roof was covered with iron plates. These plates held jagged spikes and knives to hurt boarding enemies. General Yi Sun-sin even went so far as to cover these spikes with grass and hay to surprise of the enemy when they boarded the ship. Ouch!

The cool part is at the ship’s bow, a dragon head arched out, its fanged mouth open and wide enough for a cannon to fit inside.

Yi Sun-sin cleverly burned mixed sulfur and saltpeter to create a black smoldering cloud. This cloud hovered over the ship and hid it from invaders.

In Yi Sun-sin’s journals he writes the cloud was, “Like a mist so that the enemy could not see the ship.” Approaching enemies would never know where the Turtle Ship was or the moment of their attack.

Using the forty cannons on board, General Yi Sun-sin wielded a fierce attack on the Japanese. At the battle of Myeonnyang, 133 Japanese ships fought against 13 Korean ships. General Yi Sun-sin came out victorious and was able to protect his beloved Korea.

First Draft is Finished!!!!!

Feb 25, 2009 | | 24 Comments

Wow. I can’t believe it. I’ve just finished my first draft of my paranormal YA!!!!! I’ve been closeted up for the last two months working on it. Drinking too much coffee and eating too much chocolate. But it’s good and it feels fabulous to have the draft there.

It came out as 68,000 words but there are parts that I’ll need to go back and add and some scenes I’d like to expand—like the final fight scene!

Sure, it’s a bare skeleton but it’s something to work from. So to celebrate, Luke and I made chocolate cake.

And we made enough for you too! It’s yummy and very chocolaty. Have a piece!

Mapping Out Your Mystery in a Big Way

Feb 20, 2009 | | 13 Comments

Mysteries are so much fun, not only to read but to write. Yet to write a great mystery, you’ve got to plant your clues at the perfect time and the right place and this is trickier than it looks.
As I began writing my tween mystery set in a French castle, I realized that there was so much going on and all in within my main character’s week vacation.
To keep track of the characters and their contribution to the mystery, as well as when I was setting my clues, I decided I needed to write it down in a chart. And not any chart, but a massive one.
The picture you see here is the chart I drew up for Princess and the Pen and it’s a piece of butcher paper the size of my queen sized bed (actually a little bigger). I divided my story up by days. Then I color coordinated my characters so I could see at a brief glance who was doing what in my story.
Not only did this give me a clear picture of which days the clues were placed and discovered, but it also shows me who did the planting and digging!
After I was done, I taped it to my wall and was able to see a clear picture of what was happening and when in my novel.
Give it a try! Of course when guests come over, you might want to shove your new ‘wallpaper’ under the bed. They might not appreciate its beauty like you do.

SCBWI Korea

Feb 17, 2009 | , | 6 Comments

SCBWI now has a chapter in Korea! SCBWI stands for Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators and it is an organization that supports writers and illustrators. I’m so excited about having a chance to meet up with other children writers here in Asia and make connections and have a support group.
We will be starting some with meeting in local coffee shops and touring Korean bookstores but it’s our hope to have author presentations and agent interviews too.
Looking forward to what is in store for the Korea chapter!

The Love Triangle

Feb 10, 2009 | | 15 Comments

In honor of Valentine’s Day coming soon, my topic is on love, specifically the love triangle in YA novels. Let it be known, I’m a sucker for a good romance, and even a bigger sucker when I can’t figure out who will the main character will go with in the end.

My favorite love triangle is in Pride and Prejudice (love that book!) where Elizabeth first falls for Wickham, who turns out to be a scoundrel, but this in turns gets Mr. Darcy (swoon) to become jealous and so release the tension. But then, I always thought Elizabeth fell in love with Mr. Darcy on day one. Talk about denial!

Another great love triangle was in Tantalize where Quincie’s love for Keiran is challenged when a new chef comes into town. The ending of this story really threw me for a loop because I wasn’t expecting it. I like surprises.

And then of course there’s the famous Twilight series. The love triangle between Bella, Edward and Jacob didn’t really start until New Moon came out. Truth: I found this one annoying because I wasn’t totally convinced Bella ever really loved Jacob as deeply as Edward.

So, I’m terribly curious!???? What makes a love triangle work for you? Or what really bugs you?

Picture Tagged

Feb 9, 2009 | | 13 Comments

I was tagged by Kim to post my 4th picture from my 4th picture folder. I was like, “Eek! What picture am I going to find?”
Scary. I know.
Turns out Caleb, my five year old, popped up on the screen. Adorable isn’t he? In this picture, Caleb’s all dressed up for school on a rainy day, raincoat and boots (notice the fireman motif?).
Want to play too?
Here are the rules:
1. Go to the 4th picture folder on your computer.

2. Post the 4th picture in that folder

3. Explain the picture.

4. Tag 4 more bloggers.
Since this is such a dangerous game (smile), I’ll leave it up to you to choose to play or not.

Analyze This

Feb 5, 2009 | | 13 Comments

So on Typealyzer, you can type in your blog address and in seconds it analyzes your site and tells you what kind of blogger you are. Scary huh?
But I must say, there’s got to be something to this. There’s no doubt about me being a doer. So try it. It’s fun!
Thanks to Kim and Rachelle Gardner for this fun pastime.
ESTP – The Doers

The active and playful type. They are especially attuned to people and things around them and often full of energy, talking, joking and engaging in physical out-door activities. The Doers are happiest with action-filled work which craves their full attention and focus. They might be very impulsive and more keen on starting something new than following it through. They might have a problem with sitting still or remaining inactive for any period of time.

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