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Kreativ Blogger Award
So, for this award, I need to think of 7 things that I love. Not in any particular order!
1. Chocolate- obviously. My blog isn’t named for ‘Chocolate for Inspiration’ without a reason. But dark is my poison.
2. My boys- I love, love, love my boys
The Korean Fan Dance
These are pictures I took when a Korean middle school group came to dance for our students. This school is special in that all the kids who go there have a focus in art.
My WIP Needs a Name
- Requiem Coughing
- Sepia Languid
- Gold-Flake Blurple
- White Sea Pearl
- Star Tomato
Winter Wonderland in Downtown Seoul
Wanted: Surival Tips for the Obsessive Writer
Inner Conflict- Tear Up Your Characters
One focus in my current WIP is creating inner conflict in my characters. I decided to pull out some of my favorite novels to see what those characters had to go through.
Eclipse by Stephanie Meyer- Bella is in love with both Jake and Edward. She cannot love both, Werewolves and Vampires aren’t exactly buddies. She must choose.
Great and Terrible Beauty by Libba Bray. Gemma wants to bring the magic into her world but she knows she can’t control it.
Magic or Madness by Justine Larbalestier. Reason must either except the magic within herself which her mother has taught her is evil or go insane.
Wicked Lovely by Melissa Marr- Aislinn is madly in love with Seth but she is destined to become the fairey queen.
Bewitching Season by Marissa Doyle- Percy is torn. She thinks she’s put a love spell on the guy she’s madly in love with. Should she accept his love even if it’s not real or push him away?
It’s the PULL. In all these novels, the MC is pulled in two directions, both possible, but both with inner conflict. I’m trying to build this inner conflict in my characters and I’ve been pleased with the results so far.
In Donald Maas’s book Writing the Breakout Novel, he asks these questions: (Paraphrased) 
1. What does your character want more than anything?
2. What is the exact opposite of that?
3. How can you blend these to make your MC desire both?
Tear your characters up. Send them through an internal roller coaster. Put them through inner pain as well as external. After all, no pain, no gain.
Fast Drafting in 2009!
For my last book I made a sketch of an outline, which kept me focused and helped on those days where I wanted to just stare at my computer.
But for this novel, I went a step further. First I used this template to keep my story focused. I also took each character and created a web for them with all their favorites, needs, desires, motivations, and such. Jenny Myers has a fantastic character questionnaire that I used too, which got me asking some tricky questions.
Finally, I read Donald Maass How to Write a Breakout Novel, which by the way is excellent. Everything he had to say was spot on but what I liked best about his book were the examples he gave. It brought the concepts he wrote about to life. I also got the workbook that goes along with the book and I’ve been using that as well.
So, with all these tools, I’m ready to start writing! Better head back to my novel and start FAST DRAFTING!
Success in 2009!
He’s right! Goals made should be within our own power to make them happen. My critique partner, Beth Revis, talks about this on her blog too.
So this year, I’ve made my goals to be achievable only by me.
1. Finish revisions of my MG and tween novels.
2. Write and revise a YA novel.
3. Take a writing class.
4. Submit magazine articles from my travels to the Carus group and Highlights.
5. Blog and contribute to the writing community.




